Idiotic

I was alone at home.......
Nobody was anywhere around.......
T'was a perfectly nice day........ 
Yet something was wrong.......
Something was amiss......
What was it?
What was it????

The gas was on.......
The lighter not working.......
My vain attempts to light the stove......
The fire was finally lighted......
My heart heaved a sigh of relief.......
Yet something was wrong.......
Somehow.......

I went to my room......
Put on the TV........
Sat down to eat......
A fly had come to share my space.....
I shooed it away.....
My heart trembled....
Something was wrong......

I went to the kitchen again....
To dispose of the remnants of my food.........
I came out........
I shrieked with fear.......
What did I see???
Why did I scream????
Yes something was indeed wrong!!!!!

The creature was looking at me with alacrity......
Yeah, she had the urge to jump at me........
But she didn't, 
Thankfully.....
But thankfully, nothing was wrong as I expected.....
Why she was just a green eyed,
black furred, black cat!!!!!!!!



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